Gothamist: Missing Bronx Child Found

Essther

Mon, 05 Jun 2006 18:38:10 -0500

This took me three tries to read and I'm still not sure if I understand it. Geez - my high school newspaper was better written than this! My head hurts. I'm still working out this doozie: "Yesterday, it was reported that Morales was a tattoo shop regular, possibly stripper from Detroit named "Essence," had taken the 3 year old, but then it turned out she was a 13 year old girl named Tatiana Morales..."

SATAN

Mon, 05 Jun 2006 14:36:13 -0500

real copy editor - You're wasting your breath. It has been pointed out many times that Jen's grammar and spelling is worse than a Take 5 bar to no avail. I've simply learned to look past the majority of misspellings a grammar mistakes, so I can focus on the lame content.

Real copy editor

Mon, 05 Jun 2006 12:10:17 -0500

Not to be an a-hole or anything, but if you're going to have the title "editor," you should at least learn how to edit your own writing. Everything you post on this site is rife with grammatical and syntax errors. Take 2 minutes for a grammar check/spell check and read stuff out loud to see if it makes sense, and you'll be lending yourself a lot more credibility in no time.

Constant Dater

Mon, 05 Jun 2006 10:52:23 -0500

Ha, ha, Rocknrope! The poor organization of the article had me confused, too. I don't mean to be a fusspot, beacause sometimes the consistency of the sloppiness amuses me; I just take exception to the abuse of the notion of what the title "editor" means (as opposed to "writer and poster").

tien

Mon, 05 Jun 2006 10:18:46 -0500

what shocks me is how the news reports were saying that the girl has always wanted a baby. she's 13 for crying out loud! and there's no way that she looks twice her age.

Mr. Brightside

Mon, 05 Jun 2006 09:51:55 -0500

TJ Kidd????

Rocknrope

Mon, 05 Jun 2006 09:42:35 -0500

Can I still get the reward? Cause I know where he is - St Barnabas. Gimme.

mickster

Mon, 05 Jun 2006 09:22:54 -0500

I smell a L&O SVU episode!!